You recently visited a newly opened shopping mall and were not satisfied with some facilities. Write a letter to the mall manager. In your letter:
Say what facilities you used
Explain what problems you had
Suggest what the manager should do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to share my feedback on my recent visit to your newly opened shopping mall, City Square, on Main Street. While I appreciate the modern design and variety of shops, I was disappointed with a few of the facilities.
During my visit last Sunday, I primarily used the food court and the underground parking. Although the food court offers a good range of options, I found it extremely crowded, and there were not enough tables and chairs to accommodate all the customers. Many people, including myself, had to stand and wait for a long time before finding a place to sit.
Furthermore, the parking area was quite chaotic. There were no clear markings for entry and exit lanes, which led to confusion among drivers and even a minor accident. In addition, the payment machines were out of order, causing long queues at the only staffed booth.
I would suggest that you increase the seating capacity in the food court and perhaps introduce a system to better manage the flow of diners during peak hours. As for the parking, clear signage, proper lane markings, and functioning payment machines would make a big difference.
I hope you will take this feedback into consideration to improve the experience for your customers.
Yours faithfully,
Rahul Mehra
🌟 Vocabulary used in the sample answer:
✅ Facilities & places:
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newly opened shopping mall
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modern design
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variety of shops
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food court
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underground parking
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seating capacity
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payment machines / staffed booth
✅ Problems & complaints:
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extremely crowded
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not enough tables and chairs
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had to stand and wait
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chaotic
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no clear markings
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confusion among drivers
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minor accident
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out of order
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long queues
✅ Suggestions & solutions:
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increase the seating capacity
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introduce a system to manage the flow of diners
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clear signage
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proper lane markings
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functioning payment machines
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improve the experience
✅ Polite tone & formal expressions:
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I am writing to share my feedback
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I was disappointed with…
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I would suggest that you…
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I hope you will take this feedback into consideration
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Yours faithfully
🌟 Additional vocabulary you can use in such letters:
✅ Facilities:
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escalators, elevators, restrooms, baby changing area
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customer service desk, security personnel
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wheelchair access, disabled-friendly facilities
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information kiosk, air conditioning
✅ Problems:
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poorly maintained / unhygienic / inadequate
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malfunctioning equipment
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understaffed / unhelpful staff
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safety hazard / fire risk / blocked exits
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inconvenient / frustrating experience
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unacceptable delays / unreasonably long waiting time
✅ Solutions / Suggestions:
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implement better crowd control
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hire additional staff / improve staff training
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regular maintenance and inspection
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enhance cleanliness standards
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provide clear instructions / announcements
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upgrade outdated equipment
✅ Formal polite language:
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I would like to bring to your attention…
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I feel compelled to write and inform you…
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It would be greatly appreciated if…
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I strongly recommend that…
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I trust you will look into this matter promptly.
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