You are attending music classes at a local college. Write an application about dissatisfaction about music classes.
In your application, mention:
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Why you joined classes
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What you didn’t like
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What you want now
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the music classes I have been attending at your college for the past month.
I joined these classes because I have always been passionate about learning the guitar, and your institution had a good reputation for providing quality training. I was eager to develop my skills and perform at local community events in the future.
However, I am quite disappointed with certain aspects of the course. Firstly, the class size is much larger than I expected, making it difficult for the instructor to give individual attention. Secondly, the sessions often start late and end earlier than the scheduled time, which reduces the actual learning hours. Lastly, the equipment provided, especially the guitars, is in poor condition and not tuned properly.
I would appreciate it if you could reduce the number of students per batch so that we can receive more personalised guidance. Moreover, I suggest ensuring that classes start and finish on time, and that the instruments are maintained regularly.
I hope you will take immediate action to address these concerns so that students like me can truly benefit from the training.
Yours faithfully,
[Your Name]
Useful Vocabulary for This Letter
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Passionate about (strong interest in something)
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Reputation for (known for)
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Individual attention (personal guidance)
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Reduce the batch size (limit number of students)
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Personalised guidance (tailored instruction)
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Maintain equipment (keep instruments in good condition)
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Address concerns (deal with issues)
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Benefit from the training (gain from learning)
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